My family of four and I went to one of the romantic place on earth ,France.to see the grand glass boat on the river Veno … After the plane ride we got of at this air port called Veno avenue. it was lovely all the plants were so extravagant but then my in excitement took me to the boat witch was so close but all I could see was water…
LAUGHED
I love going to the zoo, because they always put a show on. My favourite show is called Jim the gorilla and his pink bicycle. Why is that my favourite out of all 11 because once when I was 6 years old I went to watch him in the grand hall way. I was admiring the pictures on the wall when I herd a booming voice I introducing the gorilla when the voice had faded ball of fluff came out on a bike everyone laughed…
it was Christmas my favourite day of the year, I got lots of chocolate\ sweets and other things but wan thing I got was a red and black deluxe racing car but only was there was no batteries so my mum went out to get some shed come back and we had It ready to go but when we put the batteries in it did not work I was devastated…
You think about of an ending about why the car did not work and if anything happens to the car like sets on fireor starts to work again
By lee
Year 6 @ New Longton 